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Is there anything else? This resume is a bit “thin” isnt it? I thought he had 1 full term as a Senator? This needs more elaboration on his qualifications. I think that would be a lot more appealing! Bold TextI would reverse the entire dates sequences, i.e. put the Newest Job first then the last would be Obams's first job. Also, I would narrow the word Chicago by using the word City sometimes. I would START out by puting down his Name, Marital Status, Chrildren and take OUT Church and i…